Thursday, May 7, 2015

Location Description

In my Screenplay writing class we had a location description assignment and I pulled from the beginning of my short story, Rise.

Theron sat stunned in the driver’s seat, the truck pulled over to the side of the highway.  Smell of iron from Wyatt’s blood was beginning to make his stomach churn.  The map of Nebraska laid crumpled with red fingerprints between the seats on the console.  Every inch of the front of his truck was sticky, tainted.  He looked in the rearview mirror to see his face, half illuminated by the sun while the other was as if he was trying to use costume paint, like Two Face from Batman.
Cars rushed past his, their engines roaring towards the next destination.  Theron looked out at the flat landscape surrounding the road, low grass plains and dirt.  The land was as barren as he felt.  They were supposed to make it through together, but that shootout was quick and Wyatt was inexperienced.  He looked back over at Wyatt’s soaked body, Theron’s white tank top balled up on the bullet wound.
He reached over and gently shut Wyatt’s eyes.  His stomach churned and he got out of the car.  The fresh air couldn’t rid of the smell but he finally felt like he could breathe.  And with that first breath in, he let out a guttural cry.  He fell to his knees and slammed his fists, causing the rise of dirt clouds around him.           




INT. CAR – DAY

The seats are bathed in blood and a body, WYATT, is slumped in the passenger.  A balled up TANK TOP rests over the wound.  His eyes are vacantly staring up at his friend.  A bloody MAP is stuffed between the two seats on the middle console. 

THERON, 24 and now hell bent on revenge, sits stunned in the driver’s seat.  He stares ahead at the road, void of how to handle the recent death. Theron’s face is half covered in blood while the other by the sun.

Theron looks out at the landscape, a flat sea of grass and dirt surround the small strip of HIGHWAY. CARS pass by, SOUNDS of roaring engines and the cutting of air fills the silence. 

Theron looks over at Wyatt, tears beginning to from. He reaches over and CLOSES Wyatt’s eyelids.  He then gets out of the car to breathe and to release his anger.



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